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Friday, 14 October 2016

Love in Frames - Frame 2

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I stalked you that day from the market-place, thrilled to bits when I saw you entering your home – the home of family friends! I knew then, that our match was pre-ordained! After that day, I often hung around your place, near enough to see you but still too wary to come closer. Things took their own course when my family started nudging me to get married, suggesting various suitable matches. I rejected all until I came to the inevitable choice from a well-known family…..you my darling girl!
You blushed when I asked if you liked street-food, on our first official date. I knew exactly what you loved, the spicy ‘chaat’, the sizzling ‘aloo-tikis’, the succulent ‘jalebis’ and of course the ice ‘golas’! We went to all your favorite haunts and I simply gazed at you while you devoured the treats like no one was watching, whispering jokes about the pot-bellied gentleman next to us with a poker-straight face and egging me on to try out the super-hot ‘mirchi bhajias’! My tummy cringed at all this street-food but the glee on your face seeing my tongue and ears on fire made it a trivial fare to pay. That little bit of food on the tip of your pert nose bothered me and before I could do something rational about it, I found myself bending down to kiss it away…little realizing how I must have shocked you.

“Sweetheart, I am leaving now, I’ve whipped up a little quickie lunch for you and Ansh, sorry no pizza….too much junk happening! Taran is almost done with breakfast, ready to be shipped….so bye love, I have to rush.” She absently ruffled Vivek’s hair and with a quick peck on his head bent over the morning papers, she was off. The taxi was her regular - Mishraji patiently waiting inside with his toothy, “Namaste Mayddumji.” Diya smiled to herself as she got into the taxi.

From the corner of my eye, I saw you ogling me. You were different from the other guys in your group. Tall, good-looking...yes, but with that silent, brooding demeanor that I found so attractive. I pretended not to notice you and laughed louder than usual, flashing my cheeriest best that day. I remembered seeing you at a family gathering some years ago and I felt safe in the knowledge that you were from a family known to mine. I was conscious of your unwavering gaze, but I don’t think I let you know that. I ensured I walked back home slowly enough, when I realized you were following me….you big oaf, you never were light on your feet, were you?
I was not terribly surprised but super-excited when our families got together to discuss our alliance. I day-dreamed about you quite a bit and a couple of times I even thought I saw you near my house but soon dismissed it as a figment of my imagination and wishful-thinking! I was glad our first official date was to be un-chaperoned, something unheard of in those days but complied with nevertheless, thanks to your modern-thinking and foreign-returned status. I was secretly thrilled and proud to know that you had decided to forsake the US of A after completing your studies there, preferring instead to find your fortunes back home.
On our first official date, when you asked me if I liked street-food, I blushed recollecting the last time I had been gorging on it; with you my dear as the silent observer. I felt at ease with you, not at all overwhelmed and soon I slipped into my usual non-stop banter….of course later I worried, had I been over-boisterous?
At the chaat-stall, when I saw your head swooping down towards me, I couldn’t believe that you were going to kiss me in public…that too on the very first day we’d met! I nearly panicked but then I realized, that you silly boy were on the harmless errand to redeem my nose of the bit of food stuck on it! You still do it sometimes, how some things never change!
How embarrassed you looked after that, I think that’s when I fell in love with you! Or maybe it was earlier when I saw you boldly trying all that junk I was egging you to try, smiling through your streaming eyes and nose!


FRAME 1 << TO BE CONTINUED >> FRAME 3 >> FRAME 4 >> FRAME 5

Disclaimer: All the characters in the Love in Frames series are fictional, any resemblance to anyone living or dead is purely coincidental and unintentional.


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Copyright © 2016 KALA RAVI

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What a sweet love story. I love how you are telling both sides Kala.
1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Very sweet story Kala..you are good with fiction..keep writing 😊
1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Interesting! Well written, will come back for the next frame.
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1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Nice progress to part one. The story is building up well, with stories of both the sides. Looking forward to next part, Kala.
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1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Ah, I love mushy tales! I hope everything remains lovey-dovey for them. Interesting narration, Kala!
1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Ah ha! This is so sweet Kala. When is Frame 3 getting published ? ;)
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1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
Very well narrated Kala Ravi. I love such rendering describing not just human emotions but life in a city. The last part was well-etched and the pressure that makes romance and courtship a heart warming affair.
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Ah! Love is in the air and have no flaws. I'm loving it! Keep writing :)
Waiting for the next part ! :)
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1 reply · active 444 weeks ago
So beautiful and positive...I love the way you describe the finer nuances of the relationship. Eager to know what happened next :D
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This is such a sweet story! Loving it Kala! :)
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So romantic.It's difficult to write stories with positive storyline. But you have totally aced it
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wow! nice love story and positive too..great!
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Very sweet. I am liking the double sided narration as well.
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There is always 'the other side' we dream to know about. How beautifully we weave those thoughts and then wave them away thinking it won't be that way, not knowing that it is indeed that way :)

Such a wonderful read this one. Waiting for more:)
The narration was so vivid that I could picturise it happening in my mind!

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Divya
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Awww. Can this be anymore cute? I loved how you are narrating the story from both the perspective. It's hard to hide love after all. Loving this series.
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