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Tuesday, 2 August 2016

What you don't know


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What you don't know

Bonny little girl skipping on the streets,
Didn't your mother tell you,
Don't go here, don't go there alone.
Don't do what you don't know.

Blooming teenager chatting with folks unknown,
Don't you know any better?
Don't speak to him, don't listen to her.
Don't do what you don't know.

Bustling young lady working late,
Did no one tell you how to work?
Don't think, just follow the leader.
Don't do what you don't know.

Blushing shy bride, setting your home,
Do you have any clue?
Don't keep this here, don't keep that there.
Don't do what you don't know.

Bumbling new mother, babe in your arms
Don't you think it's wrong?
Don't feed him this, don't rock him thus.
Don't do what you don't know.

Buxom matron, sitting at the computer,
Don't you have better things to do?
Don't think you are free, don't think you can flee.
Don't do what you don't know.

Benign old lady, rocking in your chair,
Did you not hear me call?
Don't bother to answer, don't bother us.
Don't do what you don't know.

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Copyright © 2016 KALA RAVI



Today's blogging prompt is What you don't know
Here's hoping for brighter, safer, more enlightened and forward-looking future for our girls!
 

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How the don'ts follow us everywhere! To block them out and do your own thing is the only way to survive. (Had to smile at 'buxom matron')
1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
When will all the naysayers realise that the more someone hears 'don't' the more they want to 'do' so.
1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
Wow Kala, You summed up all the stages of our Life so beautifully. Lovely!
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Awesome! Penned down beautifully, Kala. 😃
1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
This is all of us! It is such a sure real description of what we all go through. The rules filled with don't vary but are there always. I wish, peopel just learn to let others be, especially the women.
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1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
Arent we tired of being told what to do? good one Kala
1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
Great use of the prompt as it comes back again n again 😊 Especially women it is that get too many DONT's and you have brought it out so well almost from cradle to grave in your poem Kala
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1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
Enjoyed your journey through life. Was even better in poetic form. Very nice.
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1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
Kala, your poem is the voice of today's woman. What a great post, loved it.
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Wonderful and apt Kala! How've defined everything that comes to us with every passing phase and yet everybody is ready with their unsolicited advises to throw at everyone, regardless of the age!

Loved the poem!

Cheers
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Aah! The naysayers and the nonbelievers who try to impose their self-limiting beliefs on others! That's a wonderful journey of all stages of our life. Beautifully done, Kala!
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1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
They more they say don't, I more I do it :) I liked how you portrayed how interference follows us everywhere, at any age.
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Wow! Neatly summed up a woman's life!
1 reply · active 454 weeks ago
so sad to be tied to chains like this, being told what to do and what not to do... An entire life story of a woman, sad and yet so beautifully penned.

Shubhangi @ The Little Princess
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Nisha Sanjeev · 454 weeks ago

When you think of it...so true. Your post rightly points to our conditioning - our first instinct is always 'dont' before we try understanding the other person.
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The more someone says 'dont do it' the more we're tempted to, isn;t it? :)

but I do get your post - it just highlights the social conditioning that women in our society go through
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Our lives are a series of do's and don'ts isn't it? And most of the times it is women that have these restrictions imposed on them.. How good life would be if not for these!
:) I know! Damned if you do and damned if you don't - story of our lives!
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This reminds me of all the things people say, but I don't pay heed to. Different stages of life and the same story.

Saru
A stirring poem that leaves no life unexamined, unjudged.
Phew! If we actually listened t all the naysayers, we would have been lying in our cribs till the day we died!
A beautiful and thought provoking post, Kala!
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